I will say this story is good.I definitely suggest new reader to read it.it is one of the best video game novel out there(among recently released video game novel)old readers will enjoy it tooI hope it get picked.. not those which garbage Novel like before.
Great story, i recommend to read itIt's kinda hard to read first in earlier chapters because of information dump and introduction flow (plus it's making it more hard to read because of kinda low quality translation). It's got interesting idea about the game itself. Not game that goes to every dungeon to just kill mobs, but has multiple games to play from the 'homeland' that player can choose. It's getting better the more the story progress. The MC is calm and clever, also has his own idea to do something. Maybe just like other novel, many girls will be near the MC (either from teammates, got recommend from elderly, got rescued, and so on). I just hope it's not harem, but let's see how the story progressed.
I think you should improve your writing, some of your chapter is not that good, and please clarify your story cause sometimes you cant feel the yaoi vibe in their, but over all its okay.I think your good even though english is not your first langauge.Continue writing stories.
This novel is incredibly angsty and overall cringe. Especially the beginning. Hard to get through without endless secondhand embarrassment. Couldn't read past the first 15 chapters or so.
This really awesome and i really Like this Books and i really enjoyed it and i really Want People to Know That this writer ia really good and Amazing and i Love him so much
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