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Just asking when this story will continue... It's been a really long time now... What happen??? I like this story although there're something that I can't understand but overall this story is fantastic... Kinda sad
slow slow and slow🐌I loved the character development of protagonist . I have read about 85 chapters and till chp 50 it is extremely slow story development but after that there is a blossoming of intrest in the story . I had to constantly think about should I drop it(bcoz slow development) or continue it because I don't want to regret to miss an interesting story, but........................ now times have changed I started to like even slow pace story ....... pretty contradictory, I guess
The story was worth reading at the beginning with how the protagonist struggles and tries to rise up but the story takes a sharp turn in, well, many directions. The protagonist quickly turns complacent and incredibly racist towards the Japanese and probably to other races as well when obtaining enough power.And the story isn’t very well developed at all, it seems like a mishmash of all the author’s story ideas placed into one story. There are numerous chapters made for side stories which would be good if they actually amounted to something at all! I don’t think the author even re-visited any of the side story characters or plot line!Overall the pacing is all over the place. If you have an immense amount of patience, give it a try. You’ll need more patience than fishing to be able to get through many parts.
Overall it's a unique and funny story and the best part is that the MC the demon lord is humorous and isnt Reincarnated or transmirgated or teleported to another world it does feel more unique than any other story because it's feels like being the NPC and when summons the otherworldly being it shows his emotions and his side to it and I want it to Update it's Yet the Greatest story I read and Author pls Update daily
I only read a little bit and it's not bad! It should be called "Doting Yandere Wife System" The MC that does not know what fear is, continuously is saved by the System, to calm down this scary wife. It's been a long while since I have seen a funny misunderstanding system. The wife is more of the main character because even the system is weaker here.BUT THIS MIGHT BE HAREM. I hate when Authors do things like this. It makes no sense to me, it was good as it is so why force it? Of course if by any chance I'm wrong please tell me... I just don't feel like wasting my time for another bad built-up relationships.
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