I'm all caught up now at chapter 315, and could not put down this novel when I was reading it. I really love how Jaya is developing and it's reallly cool when he meets these past superstars and becomes close friends with them like with Kawhi.Please come back soon author! We miss you π
This is one of the best Storys i have ever read on this app. The characters feel so genuine and refreshing its honestly amazing. The balance between the 2 protagonists characters and there romance is written to absolute perfection My only point of criticism would be this story would really profit from a bit of proove reading. Dont get me wrong it is by no means badly written, its just that sometimes there is a word too much or a Word missing etc. doesnt really effect the reading in any dramatic way tho.
This novel is similar to many already posted long ago on this platform i don't want to be rude to any readers and publishers, but all they did was change all of the characters names. The plot is basically the same and everything like many others have said this novel is a knockoff of another.
50 chapters inno problems with the writing easy to read and the mistakes there is aren't a big deal as there not often. Over all the story is fine but at same time many forced situations and from my initial thoughts on what the story would be from the description of a mc that has to pave his own way in cultivation no matter how stacked against the odds thing are against him with his background and cultivation talent have to say he's had things being pretty convient the whole time. For some reason author has made the concept of strength a cultivator should have at each stage come off pointless. Just makes everything seem completely forced when you have the mc who still at the first tier in cukvation being able to inflict wounds or now even kill someone multiple tiers above his level. Even if the excuse is they were tired I don't see it working why because even a tired body builder is still going to be stronger then a average person, a tired long distance runner is still going to be able to out run a average person. Let alone people that should be hundreds of times stronger then the mc and having abilities like spiritual sense and experienced many years of battle compared to the mc who's still new to all of this. World background honestly is lack luster I don't expect to know of higher worlds or other kingdoms by now but at least give the places the mc is at sense of existence. Descriptions on the size of the location, what's there what it looks like and the people and what there doing. This is good filler and at same time as long as done right meaning full filler because it fleshes out the world the mc is at. The Author deserves praise on the upload rate very rare see a author put out 14 chapters a week when so many struggle to just put out 1.
don't get your hopes up the first chapter is clickbait. waste of time. clownsπ€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π€‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π‘π€‘π€‘π€‘
Stuff you are looking for is good....but story is about a irresponsible rapist who is always insecure...Details:1. He fucks/rapes women here and there and leaves them2. He doesn't think before he acts, and acts in the dumbest way possible3. He lacks character to be a hero or a villian
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