Really poorly translated. The speech sounds really unnatural. The characters start to wax poetic about how great the mc is to set up the mc greatness instead of the author actually writing the character do anything special. The main character goes on a stupid power trip first thing.
It's just a pathetic high word count story. There s so much needless description and useless over worded junk you can skim read the story and not miss anything. I'll label it a cash grab word count trash story.
Poorly translated it seriously needs an editor.
Junk world building.
Trash character design.
World background is just more word padding.
This is insane ... first:- where did this novel pop up from?
Secondly:- what's up with the writing.... well either the writing or translation.... I can't follow....
Plz put this back where u found it... and learn to work the cue, how else am I supposed to get points,so that I won't have to wait for ads....lol.
Honestly the translation is so bad its almost unreadable. Story also seems to be a bore. Can easily tell editor isn't a native English speaker or is just horrendous at English.
Ok, I try to read this novel until chap 27, and you know what? It's such a mess, the author clearly try to make this novel like more grandeur and mysterious but what I see only a many dump unnecesarry information.
The transition of scene always abrupt and really weird especially when the MC try to reminiscing his past and then suddenly change to present again.
And the TL is so-so, the scructure of sentence is really weird for me who even isn't native speaker.
So the conclusion of the review is :
If you want to read many dump unnecesarry info then just don't read this.
Ps.
the author clearly try using word count business to make a lenghty chapter so his/her can make more money.
The world setting is supposely 18-19 century Great Britain like country (Holy Titan Empire).
They have places like Dublin(Dulin) Buckingham Palace (Hamilton Palace) Dartmoor(Darmoga).
The novel aimed at young Chinese audience and I think the author only loosely adopt western customs when convenient.
Many differences from western customs.
Naming were sh*t.
MC name is O' Neil Andrew Morisette.
Name like O' Neill , O' Shere, O' Hara are basically surnames meaning "of Neill (descendant of Neill)" etc. For example Jack O' Hara = Jack who is a descendant of Hara (Eaghra).
So the MC first name is "Of Neil" but actually he is not a descendant of Neil or something!
He is from Morissette family so why use that name?
And his nickname is Oscar which is a farcry from O' Neill in western culture. ( In Chinese name O Neil and Oscar are similar but this is a western style novel, so author should mind the details.)
Similar is the case of Antonia. Author made her nickname Annie. But the short forms of Antonia which people use are Nia, Toni, Tonia, Tonya. Antonia meaning flower.
Annie is known to be derived from Hebrew name Hannah meaning gracious.
In short this is a story which author pretend to be high class with some flowery words but he didn't even know the meanings of his own work.
It is sad to read.
The story is ******,
People love MC, worship even
MC sleep with a random character
Haters try to kill or frame or oppress MC
MC win over them
And then the author explain for 1 chapter, why is this happening, why MC is winning every time, why every haters lose and why people worship MC.
Author said MC is in prison since he is 5 years old. And I don't understand why ruthless,coldblooded and scheming inmates fear and worship him .
May be I will read more of this when I am extra bore again.
Editors! We need to summon bunch of editors! It's still not too late, we can definitely improve this in the early stage! Hurry hurry.. get all the magicians ready!
First of all the novel is bad but what makes it even worse is the machine level translation.... There are so many good novels out there why translate this kind of garbage....?
I have to go to sleep, because tomorrow I have to get up early ... and just you put a new novel, an unexpected day e.e
Now I will have to stay several hours to read it, bad there webnovel u.u
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It's just a pathetic high word count story. There s so much needless description and useless over worded junk you can skim read the story and not miss anything. I'll label it a cash grab word count trash story.
Poorly translated it seriously needs an editor.
Junk world building.
Trash character design.
World background is just more word padding.
Secondly:- what's up with the writing.... well either the writing or translation.... I can't follow....
Plz put this back where u found it... and learn to work the cue, how else am I supposed to get points,so that I won't have to wait for ads....lol.
The transition of scene always abrupt and really weird especially when the MC try to reminiscing his past and then suddenly change to present again.
And the TL is so-so, the scructure of sentence is really weird for me who even isn't native speaker.
So the conclusion of the review is :
If you want to read many dump unnecesarry info then just don't read this.
Ps.
the author clearly try using word count business to make a lenghty chapter so his/her can make more money.
They have places like Dublin(Dulin) Buckingham Palace (Hamilton Palace) Dartmoor(Darmoga).
The novel aimed at young Chinese audience and I think the author only loosely adopt western customs when convenient.
Many differences from western customs.
Naming were sh*t.
MC name is O' Neil Andrew Morisette.
Name like O' Neill , O' Shere, O' Hara are basically surnames meaning "of Neill (descendant of Neill)" etc. For example Jack O' Hara = Jack who is a descendant of Hara (Eaghra).
So the MC first name is "Of Neil" but actually he is not a descendant of Neil or something!
He is from Morissette family so why use that name?
And his nickname is Oscar which is a farcry from O' Neill in western culture. ( In Chinese name O Neil and Oscar are similar but this is a western style novel, so author should mind the details.)
Similar is the case of Antonia. Author made her nickname Annie. But the short forms of Antonia which people use are Nia, Toni, Tonia, Tonya. Antonia meaning flower.
Annie is known to be derived from Hebrew name Hannah meaning gracious.
In short this is a story which author pretend to be high class with some flowery words but he didn't even know the meanings of his own work.
It is sad to read.
The story is ******,
People love MC, worship even
MC sleep with a random character
Haters try to kill or frame or oppress MC
MC win over them
And then the author explain for 1 chapter, why is this happening, why MC is winning every time, why every haters lose and why people worship MC.
Author said MC is in prison since he is 5 years old. And I don't understand why ruthless,coldblooded and scheming inmates fear and worship him .
May be I will read more of this when I am extra bore again.
Now I will have to stay several hours to read it, bad there webnovel u.u