I haven't even read the novel. Just the synopsis. But for that I'll give you a five star. I'm still reading Lord of the Mysteries. After finishing I'll give your novel a go. Bro, one thing. Put reader's first, fine. But don't get tired from all the posterior ends in the platform who complain about every single thing. Pace the novel well so that you don't get tired from writing. Character development, plot, grammar, everything can be learnt from experience. This is just your first novel. Take into consideration your mentality too. Don't get too tired so that you leave it without end. Take a hiatus. So many authors who had good ideas or potential for a story, stopped after some time cuz people where blabbering about character development and stuff. They tried to please the readers whithout thinking of themselves and got tired so they stopped the novel.
its not worth it. everything is kinda baseless and he is live streaming while he is sitting down. they call his deceased grandfather ironman when he was a priest. idk its just brainless and makes me angry. stopped after 1.5 chapters.
Very interesting, a third person pov of watching the MC of a xianxia novel and manipulating events to his own advantage, only worrying point is that his progress is too fast, and novels tend to get dropped by the author when he can no longer progress with the story.Hope author-san can plan his progression so the novel can reach chapters in the triple digits...😁
Despite promising myself Not to read trial novels again, Here I am against my better judgement,Anyway, You will only get this game if you have played Board games like Dungeons And Dragons. But with immersive reality. Basically You are the player in an VRMMORPG but you can’t control your movements, But it’s decided by dice throw. I haven’t played those board games either so I am mot exactly clear about the concepts, I have just seen it being played sometimes. The translation is quite bad so it’s even more confusing.First Chapter is about him doing first mission, “.Rd - 7” is dice throw. KP is a Dungeon Master, Basically they recount the story, Like how MC threw a 0 so his shotgun exploded. You can google Dungeons and Dragons to understand the concept better before reading. Anyway I couldn’t continue because of the lack of clarification from the Translator and the almost MTL level quality of translation. Such a novel need so much info to understand what’s going on, Yet the Translators explained nothing.A new concept to Gaming novels. I have no idea what bs the synopsis is even about.
Story pretty much 3rd rate.. Bro seems to love yaoi and yuri lol.. While its awkward to read sometimes especially when writing some ***** scene but I can see he was doing his best.. To bad not much stable update.. Still good to read if you want to pass time..
First chapter, already died cuz of how good it iz. Maybe, if I completely read this, maybe the whole omniverse will explode. Lmao. Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters Need 140 Characters
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