It's a mess. It's a hodgepodge of ideas from different stories connected through the idea of a house mutating. Or a system connected to a house. By chapter 20 something, it's a system with personality novel and the house is sidelined as a resource. This story doesn't know what it wants to be.At least the basic writing is decent - no bad grammar, half-finished sentences or vocabulary used oddly.It could have been a good story even with the elements from different novels (shadow hack, fishing the myriad heavens, my backyard is a dump..) if the unique aspect, the house, was developed properly. And by that I mean in a consistent way, with house as the focus, and using elements from those stories that fit with the golden finger, that is, the house. But alas, earwax, ahem, no, I mean it's not to be.
I'm already hooked I can't wait to see where this goes it's an Orginal novel that has gained inspiration from Avatar the Last Airbender I believe and become this VR game. I have high hopes for this and hope this can be released a lot.
the whole bro this and bro that is so annoying the story idea isn't bad but just can't get past how he talks I have lived in California where the surfers are and even they never said bro that much
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