author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women , balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation.(I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.
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Love it! I love when protagonists are the world itself! Creating their own species and watching their stories and progression through an all-seeing eye. Keep up the great work! I can't wait to see where the story will go!
It was my mother. Hearing her voice made me come to my senses. I didn't realize that I had stopped breathing until I sucked in a deep breath and sighed of releaf. I ran all the way across the yard, feeling as if something was trying to pull me back to the forest, making me run as hard as I could until I reached the back door. I stood there, crouched over as I tried to regain my breath, my heart thudding loudly in my ears. My head craned up, and my eyes locked on the deep dark forest in front of me, making my heart skip a beat and an unsettling feeling rush through me.
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