good story, it's just very annoying that the MC is referred to as Qin Tian all the time even though he should actually be Oscar, especially when everyone else has German names or when others address him as Oscar. That seems to alienate the MC from the story.Can it maybe be changed?
Great book so far, the prologue was a bit dark but it fitted really wel in the story and it explained a lot about the actions of the protagonist. Some part of the story took a bit of inspration of other books but you did it in a way that it fits in your story and not just copy pasted it and that was well done. I look forward to the direction that will take this book in. The only sad part is dat I couldn’t read it completely in the 24 hours that is was free.
It started great but turned into absolute garbage, storywise. I do hope other works from the same author is better since they do have amazing potential.
Hello 👋 everyone. This is the Author here. Volume 1 of EGO is now finished, and Volume 2 will be starting very soon. I hope you are ready, and I hope you enjoy my story. Thank you very much for your support
i would appreciate reviews to my story and what mistakes or fault i may be making in storywise...as beginning writer i accept any criticism as it helps me grow as a writer
Annoying Narrator here, and yes, I'm giving my book a shameless 5-star rating! Let's address this epic prologue first. I'm a bit nervous about a 27-chapter, nearly 50,000-word intro. Why so long? Because the protagonists are ridiculously powerful. Consider NOX and his Pathos Emotion System. He quantifies emotions into points within the same space-time, using them to create skills, laws, and concepts for battle, all without mana. Essentially, he could kill gods with enough Emotion Points, even as a mortal. However, the prologue reveals the formidable enemies NOX and Lucas will face, their situation after time regression, and the vast scale of the cosmology and power levels. I won't make grand promises about the plot, but I can guarantee well-developed, non-one-dimensional characters and a brisk pace. You can dive into the prologue for all the details, or skip it if 27 chapters is too much.
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