The hero’s extra

As someone who is reading ahead on patreon, the story is alright. It's not a masterpiece but it doesn't need to be. It's a fun read with good characters. The MC is a mysterious guy with unknown past maybe we'll learn about it in the future. Most of all this story has a Fatty. We all know that stories with Fat side characters are generally good. What I appreciate the most about this story is the humor. It hits you out of nowhere but it hits like a truck, not forced or unnatural at all...

Your novel presents a captivating and dark world filled with twisted, psychological horror. The setting of Skull Island of the Devil is chilling, with its detailed descriptions of sadistic tortures and the despair that envelops the prisoners. The gruesome imagery is unsettling, but it creates a haunting atmosphere that pulls the reader into this brutal reality. The characters, especially Eva and Mason, stand out with their rebellious and fiery personalities, adding tension to the already grim environment. The plot moves at a thrilling pace, keeping the suspense high, and the unexpected twists, like the lava substitute and Mason's hidden plans, add depth and complexity to the story. The unique blend of horror, action, and dark fantasy promises an engaging experience for fans of psychological terror. It’s a bold narrative with rich world-building and intense character dynamics.