I'm kind of disappointed in this novel. As one of the reviewers have Said, if you like the hero academia, you may like this one but sadly this is really not my cup of tea. And srsly, giving the MC's opponent a tragic back story when in the early chapters you made him so bad to the core? Dmn I really hate that part.
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I wonder why this novel is too low in ranking?this is one of the best xianxia novel i ever read,the world build,the characters,everything,...im so sad it is so very underrated😢😢😢
this novel would have been awesome if it covered the MC more, but what it covers is the side-characters or let's say mob characters more than the MC👀droppping
This needs an editor. The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low. Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students.Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.
Her lies the rambles of a madman.I was around chapter 20 i gave up yup i gave up. Its to slow paced and nothing really happens. Ex: spends 4-6 chapters trapped inside shell/clam all he does is absorb, then gets out and eaten by a bird and guess what he is now trapped in its stomach and all he does is absorb. Wth do something. Of course if you like snail pace this is for you. It might be good but its a pain to keep reading chapters wher he does the same thing as the last 2-3 chapters.Kinda like dragon ball just lots of less action and takes longer to do any thing.
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