Am I the only one noticing that the narration is so casual? Like the author doesn’t care? IDK just compare the paragraph structure to something like Shadow Slave or LoTM. It’s just like someone dreaming and writing it down without a proper structure and a way to get readers attention.
It’s like “it is what it is this is the story.” It reads like if you ask someone “Hey can you summarize this book for me.” And the reply is how the authors writes like.
Idk i hope it gets better in the later chapters. Even Sword God is way better.
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It’s like “it is what it is this is the story.” It reads like if you ask someone “Hey can you summarize this book for me.” And the reply is how the authors writes like.
Idk i hope it gets better in the later chapters. Even Sword God is way better.