sorry but mc male is supposed to be smart and from story have social skills other the dating has interacted with girls. But so far acts as if full greenhouse child. I don't get it. rest of characters are well though out. story idea good but loses so much due to male mc mess of back history.
Story was great till around chapter 120. the author looks to have changed or decided that the characters dEvelopment and relationships that formed previously, didn’t mean anything; e.g the 2 girls that were treated as part of his “family” or his assistants/maids, suddenly became outsiders that had no relationship with him whatsoever, other than as aquaintences. His personality and how he treated cultivators changed noticeably. Seems like they got someone to continue the story for the pay from Webnovel.
I want to be frank. I love this story. I have a little problem with the mc and his instability, but the biggest i have is that the writting is bad. For me, there is some miss in the text. But the story, and the world background is insane (in the good term). I really love this story. I just hope the author can rewrite the previous chapter because they are a bit missing. (I don't know who and when some character talk, it seems some info miss... i just want that text being more readable)
Found the story very bland for my liking, nothing really stood out or was interesting. Things just happened. I found the summary at the front to be really useless compared to the actually story cause the story is just very meh
It was really good and I couldn't stop reading I encourage you to write more and keep on writing. good job! I can't stop reading. I love your work and your chapters are the best.
I think that this novel is starting off very nicely and if the author continues to develop the novel it will do really well.😀Hope u can keep up this quality of writing and rate of releasing and lastly wish u all the best 🥳😃😊
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