The Village

I Fall on the Floor with a Pain in my Heart,

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

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I rate this based on what i read...It was all good...Don't let me down man...................................................................................

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Hi, here's the author, I don't fell like giving me five stars. I'm simply starting so I'm sure it's not too good. As more, sometimes I read again some chapters and find mistakes (obviously those that I've noticed are later corrected) and I don't upload following a schedule, so sometimes I might be busy or I might forget, but I hope to receive your evaluation too

the novel is pretty good author does a really good job

i just came for the free FP given for the review

Interesting setup with Oceana's struggles and the tension of being scorned! Maybe expand a bit on her mother's return—what does it mean for Oceana? This could add a great hook!