A moving novel. The characters are well defined. The scenes are sometimes over presented. The same to the cruelty Rishika has to go through, But a good story, all in all. Not to mention, what a parental carelessness, questionable brotherly love!
I love this story. Escpeically since aarin is so frwaking clever to trick older more experienced (in the current world) into things that they didnt even think to comprenhend. Im dying of laughter. Keep up the good work
Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice.The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!
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