Seriously disappointing. Contrived and forced "hardship" plot points. The one that made me stop reading was when the author decides to write that the fate fragment decided to do something that will forever prevent the MC from being able to use his fate powers and doesn't tell him until she gets called out by someone else,, which makes the fate fragment useless, conniving trash. It was a completely idiotic plot point, and ruined the entire plot and made me immediately despise the character which pretty much ruins the entire story since she's the second most important character after the MC.
I recommend a proofreader for this novel because the writing is downright horrible, however I commend the author for the superb story!! I got hooked the moment I started reading this!!!
it is a fun story / novel, but novels with stories like that have often been published with different histories, if possible try to make something even more interesting (no need for new novels) could be the next update improved again, and continue try, don't take or revise other novels too often to make the novel more interesting because there will still be people who read a lot and will know it, so try to have your own original novel (not the revised results for yourself /change it to match our own story) try to see the original life then develop with imagination to fit blah blah blah blah, that's like ๐ ๐ โ๏ธ good luck ๐
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