It was an ok self insert, until the protagonist did a 180 after claiming he didn't want to be a harem protagonist, and sticks his dick in a disgusting cannibal girl, cheating on the girl he's supposedly in love with.For a fucking disgusting cannibal...Yeah I don't even fucking understand anymore, it's like the author just couldn't keep it in his pants all of a sudden, we already had a romance subplot going on, and the author just straight up ruins it out of the blue after previously committing to not doing so :|
First time writing a review here but i really loved your story. Every chapter has me craving for more. The world buildings and characters all are well developed and system also doesn't make him ridiculously op so that is also what I like. ...but i would like to ask a question. If this is a harem story or not. I don't really like stories with harem much cuz they start getting rediculous with every girl trying to get mc. But could you tell if there would be any heartbreak moments (i don't like those scenes in novels) for Em and Leah as they have shown obvious interest in him. Though i will follow your story whatever the answer.
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definitely a romance story rather than fantasy. it's well written and if that's your type of genre you'll probably enjoy it. I personally think the harem is just way too big already and we're only at chapter 90 it feels a little like the author has a big and well done emotional arc planned for every new member of the harem but since once that story is told you wouldn't immediately have another big trauma/emotional moment to cover they just introduce another character wether this is ultimately what this story will become or not i can't say at this point. The fantasy elements are too irrelevant to the story for my liking and barely even qualify as a sub plot at perhaps 1/10th of the story content. We barely have any relevant dungeon clearing (2 so far and they were very quick and kind of mid) the exploration of the MC's powers's also gets very little room and tends to happen of screen which is a cardinal sin imo
As an author that knows the difficulty of writing a novel truly different and unique from the norm.Its's a shame and saddening to see such a masterpiece not getting the attention it deserves whilst so many "cliche novels" are occupying higher rankings.Hopefully the readers would come to enjoy original novels one day and this novel will get the attention that it deserves.Author keep up the good work !
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