Your writing can improve. But The writing flow made me easy to read and understand about the characters and everything. I can imagine them as I read it. Your writing is neat and clear.Keep it up!
Interesting novel!but I prefer male lead than female lead though.but at the very least this novel is different from the other FL novels.so I tried reading this and yeah I think it's good 👍. I just stop to give a review and this novel deserve a 5 star ⭐. and I hope the author can update more chapters in the near future🔮. anyways I'll stop here. I will continue reading first. さよなら!
Worth a read. However, it seems this author is 100% incapable of moving the story forward unless there is some HUGE Badass group that he has to surpass ASAP or die. Why can't the author progress the story through finding out secrets to the world? Stuff left behind in ruins and old ancient tombs? I worry that this will be the the only way things progress for the rest of the story. There are 100s of stories that do this and almost 85%-90% of them are all trash
book started with transmigration, but there was no background on the cause and it jumped straight into the plot. also i dont know if the original book had anglo names but the translation does. BUT the names are reversed like in asian novels. the MC is named daniel davis. buy you find out in the 2 or 3rd chapter daniel is the family name. another character is named kitto gard. and his brothers name is kitto. so obvious structure error for a book with a western theme
If this doesn't get picked, then legit no idea what the bloody hell who's in charge of novel selection is, but fire him please.Dear lord Just make a new system already, let the people VOTE!
Not your typical idol story, i like how character was set and the story progressing. Keep up the good work Author!👍🏻🎉 (looking forward onto how his soul goes to mc)
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