The Pioneer: Age of Immortality

After all, who would dare enter into a battlefield willingly? It was a battlefield, and you had to kill ninety-nine people in order to just make it home at night!

gentle and graceful in a feminine way.'"

"You have no choice, you either go with me and become my wife or I kill your parents and let my men rape you senseless" he suggested.

it's my first time writing a novel so please give a review on what i should i improve

my first impression .. haven't read it yet

I've truly enjoyed your work; each chapter is a masterpiece of storytelling that keeps me hooked. Your creativity and dedication shine through in every word. Please keep sharing your amazing talent with us, as your stories bring so much joy and inspiration. Don't stop—you're doing something incredible!.

Harem?                                 

Yeeeeesss, I didn't find this in the Webnovel before, someone decided to post it finally! This and all of Rifujin's works are masterpieces!