In my opinion, this is one of the best novels I wrote until now. I cannot vouch that everyone will like it but I'm pretty sure that the majority of readers will learn to love this books, the characters and the authors(definitely no bragging)If questions occur, you can find a discord link in my profile. Join my discord server and ask me directly. :D
The story is solid if a little bit cliche at times, sprinkled with some twist here and there. Character driven story is the theme of this novel instead of plot driven one. There are no adversary for self reflection the MC would face as his system practically make him Basketball Jesus. The conflict would be outside the court most of the time. This can be considered a weakness of the novel, or it's strength from a different point of view depending on the author skill to write such character.Although I fear a chapter so short for once a week release in the future after it catch up with the NBA arc would hamper the story. Rule of thumb, if you can see a chapter ending by a scroll from the bottom of your phone to the top most part, it might be too short all things considered.
Great idea but i hope that author releases new chapters and only then would i read . plz plz release more chapters . I cant find bleach fanfic here !! most of them are trash or non existent .. No harem ig , thry ruin stories ngl
Nothing really happens 20 chapters in.It's one of those novels that's not too bad, just bad. Things in this novel up to now are written in a very unentertaining way, the mc wakes up, goes to school, talk with friends.. just like that, and with those events if I can call it that, nothing was written that really stood out for me. It's like the word "meh" was made solely to have a perfect description of this thing.There are stuff better out there, yet why is this thing ranked at the top?
I love this novel, for some reason I feel at ease when I'm reading, it's a really strange feeling but when I read this novel all the stress or everything that I can usually feel in other LN isn't present, it's just calming and I want to congratulate and thank the author for this.Well, let's speak about the novel itself, first there aren't that many if any fault in the language. The way the author use the words is very pleasing and not repetitve. The phrasing is good and I must say that it is more and more difficult to find novel with this quality.Then about the updating stability, as you can see, the author is uploading 14 chapters / week, which is why I think he deserves 5 stars. The chapters are not that long but the writing quality make me feel that the author spend much time working on his novel.The world background is especially good here, we have some lead about the origin of the system but not all the fact, the world is structured, there is no incoherence and everything is clear, well thought, and nit over exaggerated. The universe described is plausible. And all of this lead to a good story development.Some might think that the author is too quick with the beginning but I think that it is a strength of this novel, it skipped the boring part and always show what is really interesting (I won't hide the fact that I would enjoy if the author decided to spend a little bit more time on each part because I really enjoy reading). If the author can continue this speed or slow down a little bit it would be perfect I think.The story itself is well built, it's coherent, the goal of the MC is clear and logic and ghe way he acts and how the story evolve is at the same time a little bit obvious (if you spent the last few years reading novels you will be able to see what's coming in the few next chapters) but also surprising (the way the author make the MC acts is different but coherent, logic and intelligent).And the good world background and story development is completed by the characters, the MC and first plan characters are all interesting and I hope they can progress along the MC so that they are not forgotten like in a lot of novel because each of them has a personality which is really cool. The MC development is particularly good, he is not oblivious and his stubbornness is justified but it doesn't stop him from evolving and developing feelings.The second plan character are less developed (which is logic) but they are not stupid or boring, they blend perfectly in the story.As for the characters that only appear occasionally they are qualified by something that make you recognize them even after long time not seeing them and they add rythm and consistency to the story.For the characters that only appeared once they are either here to make the story progress or for the comic relief.All in all a rare jewel on this app, worth reading, worth following.I would like to congrat and thank the author for this story.Keep up the good work, it's really good.
I have only read 6 chapters so far, but I can already tell in time that this could possibly be a great novel.The writing quality is great (which is very surprising as a person who usually browses new novels) and honestly that's good enough for me to add it to my library.Hey author, hope you continue to develop this story and it becomes a banger.
I enjoy the unique twist on the reincarnation genre that this novel does. The MC reincarnates as a white lotus and I find the evolution ability she has to be very interesting. Unlike many reincarnation novels, the main character reincarnates to a time after her death. I find that most reincarnation-revenge story brings the MC to a point before they had died and they use their past life (now future) knowledge to accomplish their revenge. What I like about this novel is that the MC does not know who her real enemy is exactly nor does she know their motive. This creates a sense of mystery that makes me wish the author can do a mass release. It is truly a shame that the author is human with a real life and things to do and not a robot.
From the title itself I can already guess that this novel is going to be like those stories where the MC will train other characters of the story to become powerful and will have a Kingdom-building touch. I love to read stories where it isn't going to be a one-man show and it involves building territories, so I'll be giving this story a chance. I hope the author won't disappoint me.
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