The Paths To Remembrance

Please do continue to update this novel, I really like it

Heya, Its me the author of this novel. ummm I dont really know what to say but I hope you enjoy your read and help me through constructive criticism and stuff since this is my first novel... yeah. Thats all I guess thank you for taking the time to read my novel if you do read it. :D

A harsh review but that's the truth. Author had a promising premise but wasted it by rushing the story from the get go and seemingly brute forcing things like inserting romance very early on. Inconsistencies also started to prop up and judging by how the author just seemingly let it slide, not so promising. Thus, a rather unfortunate wasted potential that was ruined by blatant issues that made it bland, shallow, and forced.Benefit of doubt that the later chapters improved but the early chapters pretty much already crippled the read for me.

It's very lovely to read and I like the way of storytelling. The characters are so beautifully explained