Chu Xian decided to check his Spirit World . Once entered it was a boundless and vast world and it was like he is in his own dimension . He saw a majestic palace and there was door before him .
I get out of the car with my brothers on each side of me. Like they're my bodyguards. When we walk into the high school teenagers seem to be everywhere. They look at me but I keep walking, following my brothers to the office. They register me into the system and give me my schedule. The lady at the desk says "I hope you enjoy yourself here". I smile and thank her. I check my schedule and see that I have English first period. My brothers and I walked around trying to find the class when the bell rang, meaning that it was 1st period. And I was late. We finally found the class and my brothers knocked on the door. "Come in !" said the lady i assume is the teacher. When i walked into the class i looked around at the students faces. No one really caught my eye. That's when I saw a handsom boy sitting at the back row of desks. He was looking at me and I was looking at him. "Hello, can I help you ?" the teacher asked. "I'm a new student. My name is Leah Reign." She looked at me and smiled. "Oh okay well my name is Mrs. Johnson and I am your English teacher." I nodded and asked "Where should I sit ?" She simply said "You can sit wherever you find an empty desk." "I told my brothers that I would see them later and they said they will come pick me up from school everyday.
He stops and catches his Bayo from Bat and Yoyo hence Bayo, the sound comes from the east toward the center, he tied his Bayo and walk toward the sound but Beatrice jump in front of him and start leading the way.
I’ll be honest, I was blown away by the gap in quality between this novel and most others on this platform. The setting is similar to many other stories, but the world seems very well fleshed-out, much more than I expected.The story has progressed at a decent pace, not too fast, not too slow. The progression is logical, with the system not hogging the spotlight the whole time. It is his primary method of growing stronger, but it’s limited use has let the world and the characters take center-stage enough to make the story interesting.The writing quality is very well done. It’s probably the best quality the story has, and that’s saying a lot considering how good the rest of it is. The characters are good. The dialogue is well done, and their personalities are consistent with their actions most of the time. A bit more detail would be nice, but this review is at chapter 100, and I can tell there’s a lot more coming yet.I can’t say much for the update speed, since I binge-read all 100 chapters in a day, so I suppose I can tell you it’s not fast enough. This is the kind of author you want to kidnap and keep in your basement(with all love and respect ❤️).All in all, I really like this story and can’t wait to see where it goes. I hope it holds up to my expectations.
The writing is good but the author just made it patroon exclusive…yay…this was going to be a high star review bit not anymore. I’ve seen too many decentl novels just become a patrion exclusive because they want money.
First of all, go write your own review! Lol..., anyways, mandatory shameless 5 stars review is a must. About the book? Oh yeah, it's going to be plenty steamy and hot, just grab your pop corns and ahem..., nevermind. It's a great read, try it out and see. Also, I'm here, you can comment or ask any question you want.
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