The story seem to jump from one subject to the other. It also goes on and on about why it happened, how it happened, etc deviating from the story line I suppose it can be good if it can stop dragging along the story at how it should trail along. Good Luck to the author.
I love that this book and story is not drawn out. No filler chapters and catching story from the beginning. I'd this is how you write all books then you have a faithful reader on board. I love this story. Keep up the amazing work!!!
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