great novel before but even better with the rewrite. the novel has everything you need to keep you entertained and enjoy reading it. the rewrite has added more character growth and communication between him and women over the previous version. keep up the great work brother on this. the original was what turned me on to your works. thanks so much for the hard effort you put in to your writing. looking forward to more.
So when Minseok had accidentally spilled his watermelon juice all over her dress, she was bursting in anger. But obviously, she didn't actually burst in front of them.
Most of the time, these two boys are snubs, but they are not as bad as the other Slytherin. At least, they do not show their repulsive attitude to me anymore. Sometimes, when they are in good mood, they would initiate talking to me.
The dust remains of all three fell, falling directly onto feroo, mothly, and suri. This dust attracted the attention of the other two soul stones. Capturing the dust, they too, self-detonated, this time becoming a grey liquid. This liquid separated into equal parts, and went inside all of them.
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