Very nice! The chapters are nice and long, and full of great descriptive detail that makes this story a pleasure to read. I love the plot, especially with the idea of restarting a life after a tragedy has occurred. The characters are well fleshed out, though I would maybe like to see a bit more detail in their personality here and there. I think the one thing the author needs to work on is being careful not to switch tenses. There were several occasions that the tenses shifted, and a few grammatical errors, but these can easily be fixed.Great work author
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