Reading the first 5 chapters, I want to point out something. Jake Lin, a defected human who can't use his right hand but is a genius at mathematic. It seem like everything was normal as he got home to see his older sister, playing that popular game and possibly became a professional gamer. Then it all went spiral and out of control when she decided to use some code which caused a huge disaster and Jake Lin became unconscious, only to wake up with a "system". So far, this storyline is intriguing and kept me interested but one flaw thing about this novel is the formatting. It got a little bit difficult to understand when the conversation is jumbled up in one paragraph. I suggest the author to separate the paragraph into 1-2 sentences for us reader to read it clearly and not get confused. I wished to say more but so far with only 5 chapters out, I can only wait for more to see the development and how Jake Lin will utilize his system to benefit him such as, getting rid of the handicapped status.
i want more of this novel i really enjoy it and the author has so much to work with considering WoWs historyif any one knows where the raws are please send me the link
I just caught up with the latest chapter and all I can say is ~~~ This is wonderful ~~~ ! I don't care about the grammar whatsoever. The story is really great and feels so real! The conversation between each character is almost like how I communicate with people every day. I don't see anything forced. Action scene is fantastic .The story building, plot, arc, and the planning of the MC is fantastic and such an eye opener for me. It is unique from the rest of the stories with this kind of theme, so thank you to the author for recommending this work on facebook. I'll continue showing support as long as you make this story interesting. Keep up the good work!
If you don't like polyamory, don't read this story, it totally ruined the experience of reading this novel for me, they explain to you from the beginning of the work that the protagonist's mother created and gave birth to the protagonist because she wants her love and He looks for love without betrayal from her, that's why he didn't look for anyone else and only loves the protagonist, then why do you make the mother also have relations with her girlfriends, if from the beginning it was clear that he would only be with her, if not It's like she would have already had her own harem, and the girlfriends accept it anyway, if they make it clear that they are in love with the protagonist and the mother by going out a couple of times also makes her fall in love, what rubbish, at least it makes it clear that there will be all that In the synopsis, it screwed up my reading experience, I'm sorry for the words but this was very disappointing for me, I was loving the story so much :'v
"Alright my friends. Stick together and be safe. We get a few kills and we leave sounds good?" Keres and the rest nodded as they began their descent into the dungeon.
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