The Merchant of the Devil

Read up to chapter 28 so far it’s a good book but need some polishing you have a lot of repeat paragraphs and not everything needs a description example main character says something and next sentence is low but sharp tone. I would get it if it was every once in a while but it’s after every conversation there’s no need for that

5 star for everything. I love the characters and their different dynamics. The world building is also very brilliant. Can't wait to see how this unfolds. Great work

This book is one of the best things I have read this year. The author has a way of crafting lifelike 3-dimensional characters that is awe inspiring. Keep up the good work.

An excellent adventure so far Raiwan is a unique character

The description or the hypnosis is very catchy. I hope that many readers will support this story after the trial. Because this story is certainly nice.