Man I like the story but the grammar is atrocious. You could easily make this story way better by just using grammar or having AI refine each chapter and revise it. It make take some time but that would make the story so much better. I understand English may not be your first language but there are tools out there that can help you. If this is just a story you are doing for fun I get it . There’s no need to waste time but if you’re trying to get contracted and make money i guarantee you no one is going to pay for this kind of work .
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