The story has a lot of potential but the bad grammar ruins it,I can understand the fact that english is not your main language but you can have someone proofread and fix your work if possible.
Came over from RotUL and so far I like the story a lot. The mc is smart and uses his brain to find ways out of situations instead of just being extremely op. i like the small things with the discussion between characters that came over like “that is so op, i dont Know what op means but from your expression it Seems good” Worth the read hope author keeps it up
One of the fun and enjoyable novels to read on this platform xD If you're into Chinese history, you will definitely like it. If you are not, you will enjoy the system element and how the MC is overcoming his obstacles to survival.
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I read this on scribblehub and it's definitely one of my favorite stories currently. The writing flows smoothly, the story development is very interesting and character design is great! I especially love the father-son interactions. I'm just hoping that the updates will be more frequent.
Don't really take this novel seriously. This is mainly funny comedy. That said, I like how the author portrayed the characters. It touches all the cliches without being boring and even make fun of it.
The novel is pretty good, its also pretty slow pace, And the writing, tbh with u this is my first time reviewing a novel, well the writing in my opinion is above average. thats all i wanna say. peace
I decided to take a look at this after having read some of Skeleton Wizard's other works (Tempest of the Stellar War and Battle Frenzy). If you've read any of these other works, it's the same parallel set up with the main character's journey to becoming a legend, the loyal non human helper sidekick, an anonymous alternative identity, working toward making that ideal romance work, great friendships, and a splash of humor. Despite the similar themes, it's a worthy addition to the Tempest trilogy and a good read. Bear through the first few chapters as the world building and the terminology dump is a bit of a turn off but it quickly picks up. Also be aware that unlike Skeleton Wizard's other works, the Starcraft references are not subtle in this one. It's to the point they're actually playing a version of it in the school competitions in between killing Zerg haha.I do have to be critical of two things though. The editing is terrible. I don't mean to be rude, but it really is. Every chapter is riddled with grammatical errors and typos. Clearly better then MTL but it still makes reading unpleasant at times. There's even one chapter early on with editing notes left embedded in the text. They're still there despite being pointed out by readers in the comments and it being half a year later.The second thing would be the stability of the updates. As some other reviews have noted, the pace has dropped considerably and is erratic. I think if you hover over the release rate it's currently averaging 4 chapters a week vs. the scheduled 10 as of the time of this review. Granted, real life stuff happens, but it is something to take note of.I would definitely recommend reading this if you've read any of Skeleton Wizard's other works and can deal with the negatives I've mentioned.
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