Good ff.......Buth are you going to continue this novel or not if yes y hope you start posting new chapters soon because it has potential to be a grate novel........
I was incredibly interested the first few chapters but sooner than I would expect I found myself dropping this Novel. Too many silly developments, in more harsh words the Novel just felt stupid, after saying all that I really don't hate this it's just not for me at all.
It's another weak to powerful Pet novel. I thought the cheat system would be cool since it's basically a trainer, but it instantly gets nerfed into a generic system. It's not super interesting.
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"Hyung," Jungkook groans, unable to take his leaders teasing. He peaks his eyes open and Namjoon can see the desperateness in them, his hips stuttering in his hand and searching for more.
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