it has great potential but there are some things that are just stupid why this novel is bad 1 abilities are op when they are just common example: an archer goblin has a skill that makes you invisible If you are still and not breathing I said why it is op in a paragraph comment when it got introduced(it basically is perfect for ambush hiding and confusing your enemy) archer goblins have a skill called archers reinforcement or something it gives an enchantment to ALL weapons not only bows all weapons a sage has a skill that shows every living being in 100 meters ( it hard counters assassin's with stealth making them useless and remember this is a common skill and there are like 5 more ranks) 2 the mc can hit small targets from a distance with a bow without missing when it's the first time that he uses one ( he doesn't have any skills that help with aiming or stats that help yet) the same with a sword he became an expert with 1 hour of experience3 I found an exploit π when he enslaves a monster ( with a skill) he can give it a name when it gets a name it evolves meaning it gives more xp when killed and also gets an additional skill which he can devour π my opinion of the novel: if you don't care if the system or character makes sense read it if you don't like bad quality go as far away from this piece of art :)
It has some dark vibes to it which I really like and just reading this I feel like I have a bit of a connection with it...it makes me think a lot about life itself
Hello, Author here,This review is after 31 chapters. I've made quite a few mistakes and I know that and first few chapters aren't interesting as this is my first time writing a novel. but as the story progresses it is becoming quite a good novel to read, at least this is what I think.As for what your guys who are regular readers of my novel think, Please give your review and rate it so that your fellow readers and I can know what you think about it.As for the new readers, please give it a try and leave your review.
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