The Inked Veil

Honest review here. There are alot of errors in this novel. The story itself may be good, sadly its glory has yet to show due to this issue. Every time I open a new chapter i get bombarded by mistake after mistake. I suggest getting someone to proof read chapters or edit them. The potential is there. Sadly basic understanding of the English language is letting this novel down.

Not bad                                                                                                                                                

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Catchy synopsis. Adding this to library.Can't wait to see more of Alexander.I recommend this book to those of you out there that love adventure.

hmm .. interesting story so far...  hehehe

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