Seems to be a very wish fulfillment type novel. I've read up to ch55 MTL and it feels like every single character and scene exists to make the MC look better.On ch52 there's even a scene where the author praises the MC's amazing observation power for guessing that a table he was going towards had three people because he could see two people sitting down and that one chair had a jacket on it.Also, a lot of the time I felt like I was just reading mob characters excitedly go "he's done for now" even when they had no beef with him. Every character not on MC's side is literally out to get him.Author setup a really grand setting ranging over all of space and different civilizations so maybe you could look forward to that tho.
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Wow, this is marvellous, the author really did great work writing this, it is to be considered a masterpiece and there are very little faults from the very beginning. Keep up the good work Author ππππβ¨β¨β¨π₯π₯πππβπ π β‘β‘
unfortunately a very generic stereotypical story if you can even call it that because it is painfully slow with a lot of unnecessary repetitive dialogue and a lot of filler chapters: multiple chapters with just 'good morning' and descriptions of eatingEvery single conflict basically reads "How dare you do that to my young master" "dont you know who i am?" gets slapped, humiliated, comes back and rinse repeat... the characters have zero personality growth and the MC is painfully stupid forgetting constantly about the things he has aquired (MC gains an invaluable item to awaken a bloodline and simply does not use it at all), at times even his own system.There are so many inconsistencies in the story among which one of my favorites is that his sister gets a 1 week leave from the academy but the journey from her academy to her hometown takes more than 2months already with countless perils along the way to which she would have died multiple times over... another one being the MC staying at the exact same cultivation (peak spirit master) for 2 entire months while reaching there only took what? 2 weeks?futhermore the MC complains on a regular basis about the arrogance of nobles yet every chance he gets he regards everyone as lowly mortals - quite ironic.The only character i genuinely feel stands out is Xi Meili and author does her dirty by making her a walking garbage disposal unit.I saw a lot of potential in the novel when i started reading despite the overly pompous way the characters talk but due to the before mentioned points said potential was in my opinion sadly lost.
Popular Reviews