The Immortal Dungeon

Before he could finish his sentence, a huge body fell down on them from the top, the weight was as if a mountain had dropped on them.

Seeing her tiny face that is all exhausted and bruised I couldn't control my rage but also my helplessness on how weak I was.

What! I had to do something while I wait for my pokemons to heal, I'm waiting for them to show them to my family.

I very much enjoyed the story and the pace though I feel like it could go faster in parts slower in other but overall a great piece so far keep up the good work

This story is so amazing 🤩. It's been an enjoyable read from the very beginning. The story plot is quite Captivating. I really can't stop reading this lovely story.

Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.

interesting storyline, I love the plot and it's descriptions. keep it up