When Ivan’s daughter was born, she was named Bella! Why Alexia now? You never mentioned her whole name or even if she has 2 names! Can you please be consistent with your namings especially who’s talking and being talked to? It’s so confusing author! The story is good but the composition is annoying
The story is intriguing but all the grammar and spelling issues are painful to read. I chalk it up to English not being the author’s first language. I just correct it in my head and keep reading.
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