The God Cheese Chase

this novel lacks  proper world building , The story is also fast paced and mc is just overpowered from the start(not my Cup of tea). over all a mid novel

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I'm really enjoying this story! keep up the good work Author.

This novel really has an interesting and well-done premise from OP mc. Author san really has a good taste in nomenclature, which pleases me a lot. The only point I didn't like very much was the pseudo "break" of the fourth wall related to "authors" and "readers". And at the moment I'm reading (cp 40) the update stability really leaves something to be desired. The author said that he had problems with the Web novel, and that it has already been resolved. So I will trust my 5 stars to you author san. Congratulations and keep up the work well done! And improve the refresh rate! Of course, please lol