The First Life's The Hardest

This story really had me from day 1. This is a new author that is diving deep into his cultural. He does with great dialogue that flows into an immersive story. I really hope he finishes this story and gives us more. 5/5

In the blub/summary; "I'm native English, you won't find better grammar on this site."***Smash cut to multiple grammatical errors in that same blub.***Maybe the Author shouldn't lie through their teeth eh?

Great Love Immortal Venerable Objects to this blasphemy..........................................................................................................

If you love reading repeated information every chapter, this story is for you! IGNs not having capitals is annoying aswell but 🤷u200d♂️ other than these 2 issues the story is decent

This book is goodOne of the few books to have a main character using the light element but not darkness and fire🤣🤣🤣🤣Author please don’t drop this

So this gives a war hammer 40,000 type feel and I love it, a nice gritty character development, Co stars have logical development. On chap 50 but I'm engaged, and invested. Sad to see its completed at about 340 chaps, but still sharing up to be worth the read😁.

Its amazing, the story i read till now was amazing.. A thriller, a horror, a mystery, a love and lots of romance. I loved it........................

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