The First Alchemist

We're no strangers to loveYou know the rules and so do IA full commitment's what I'm thinking ofYou wouldn't get this from any other guyI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youWe've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itAnd if you ask me how I'm feelingDon't tell me you're too blind to seeNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give, never gonna give(Give you up)We've known each other for so longYour heart's been aching but you're too shy to say itInside we both know what's been going onWe know the game and we're gonna play itI just wanna tell you how I'm feelingGotta make you understandNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbyeNever gonna tell a lie and hurt youNever gonna give you upNever gonna let you downNever gonna run around and desert youNever gonna make you cryNever gonna say goodbye

I feel the same as many reviewers. It’s a fun story but the grammar is not good.

Keres ruefully grinned at their enthusiasm. If they only knew how torturous her training was they wouldn't be so eager to learn from her. "Sorry to disappoint you guys but she passed away recently." Seeing their disappointed and saddened expressions Keres couldn't help but think. 'How the hell am I supposed to bring you to my master on earth?'

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"Urmhhh!!!"

Nelson while he was waiting for he order, we started to play he flute, making smooth sounds.

"Now, I shall grant you any power you wish and just know should you not choose me..." He leaned in close to my ear, close enough for me to smell the decaying of flesh, and whispered "I will hunt you in Xylheim and then I will destroy whoever else you pledge to"

He suddenly let go of me as I fall down to the ground choking. I look up to the boy seeing he just silently stood there looking at me like a puppy.