Seriously, I'd been looking for something new and interesting and not overly done coz' I'd also been frustrated by how there are so many books with good concept but utterly poor and inconsistent in characters and storyline...just so many loopholes plus constant annoying attempts to make the mc so unique and unnecessarily op despite lacking in logic.I've read LOTM and such so I'm kinda a strict reader when it comes to these kind of traits hehe. And I really wonder why this has not gone on the first place yet though I find it more technical and fun compared to the current top book. All the best, Author-kun!!✨
First thing I'll say is 100% worth a read!..An amazing story, very high quality of writing with only a few mistakes. Very much a story with an OP character however as with many the enemy's scale well allowing a continued battle throughout the story, with many feeling like they could lose. There's one or two places where small parts seem to be forgotten but not too important to the overall story. Interesting storyline with both the in game and in real life.Go read it and enjoy!
I followed your previous work which was written in Indonesian. Maybe the way of writing is different because of the English language. However, the storyline is still interesting and the pace is better than the previous work. Keep the spirit.
One of the best trial so far; great premise and good story development. MC started off with a better and logical background which is plus itself.Writing Quality ★ ★ ★• Though the story is great some words are jumbled or are connected with each other example: (after,hedied)(let go.He run) and some words that aren't good with eah other or a little bit confusing.Story Development ★ ★ ★ ★ ★•Though it has a similar system as some novel here which has like collecting EXP; it has different story to it which isn't a copy paste of other novels. The MC started of from the bottom and is continuously rising through his EXP collecting. Though there are some clichés it isn't to the point that it's on every chapter.Character Design ★ ★ ★ ★•MC's quite smart (surprisingly) and is rational to what he's doing (surprisingly). He's not lazy and is very hard-working due to his EXP colllecting system, not like the other MC with system that always complains like a child who always wanted to be spoonfed. Anyway, MC is calculative with his move, though he has poor roots and vitality, he still compensate it with his EXP collections.Updating Stability ★ ★ ★ ★ ★•No comment hereWorld Background ★ ★ ★ ★ ★•It's the average xianxia/xuanhuan world building where it started off from a small town to a bigger sect to another country. That's every chinese xianxia/xuanhuan in a nutshell. But, I applaud the author for integrating newer sects and not using generic sects.Overall 4.4, though this may change in the future.
I like the story very much :)If you don't want to hear my thoughts on this Novel, then do not read it!Webnovel did something unforgiveable! They didn't even check the chapters...... only 'copy paste' from gravity tales. I read till the 105th chapter, but PayWall hindered me to read more :( . Why, a PayWall starting from the 100th chapters range when the Novel has over 1000 chapters ongoing??! It doesn't even make sense WEBNOVEL!!!!!And 10-14 SS per chapter? It isn't even worth it, because 'copy paste'(i don't know anything about CR).You should've corrected at least every chapter!It isn't flawless, it is full of grammar mistakes and even wrong sentence structure ! Do you intend us to pay for grammar mistakes?
Well i am writing this review purely due to my love for league. I have read other similar novel and haven't been satisfied due to my familiarity to game and the professional league ... I hope this novel will be better than the predecessor novel and finally i can boost up ma rank to diamond (untill now plat is my threshhold😭😭😭😭)
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