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I read all 60 chapters and I can confidently say that there is no cliche in this novel and the mtl is actually readable with 459 chapters and it feels natural. Itβs is What Is The Experience of Becoming a Vampire? and you can read it at comrade mao.
A solid 2. Great idea. But when you introduced the arena before even began to develop the life merchant story made me sigh. So much waste opportunities of a good story.So many loops holes. A will name a few that bother it me:-> The contract only specify that if he tell someone about him the contract became null. So what happens in that case ? The money magically returns to him and he keeps the gained life years ? The other party forgets about him ? Either case this magical ability will be very alluring to the underground world. If someone force to say who gave them money. You can imagine the consequences.-> Even in a offshore account he can't spend money in his home. He needs to launder money to appeared to be a legitimate gains. If not the government will be suspicious.-> What happens if someone ask for something that he can't do? What happens if he can't fulfill his part of the deal ? No alternatives explored.-> Range of the merchant world ? Somewhat we can deduce that is less than 100 meters while he follows the girls back her home.-> Body-fucking-change-pill and he offered that pill to a girl in a toxic relationship. Not even thinking about trans ? Fame wannabes girls/boys? This people will literally die for that opportunities. Even add a clause that if they reach fame they will deposit a certain percentage of money each month.-> You changed the requisite of omnipotent sight from lvl 2 to 3 from 10.000 to 1.000.000 and somehow the mc completed that in less than a month ? Bs.Sorry. Dropped the novel. Maybe even will write a similar but logical story since I like the premise.
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What captivated me in this story is the title itself. When I first read the first chapters, it was interesting and it hooked me until I realized that I kept scrolling and scrolling. Overall, I'm looking forward to development of this story. This is a must read! π€π€
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