The man laughs again, a little differently from before and with some uncertainty. Maybe he has a laugh for each situation? "My daughter, you are so funny!" ...Wow that didn't sound fake at all. "You're engaged to the Crown Prince, of course! In fact, we're meeting your fiancé and the King next week!"
has potential but the grammar is terrible.first chapters seem to be writen in a rush with not much thought put into them.story so far is just so so.hope the author improves.
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