I swear i haven’t read something so boring before this. It’s so dang predictable it’s like it was written by an AI! “I bet X character is going to show up right now and become his servant/admirer.” “I bet X item is going to appear from the system right now because he needs it in X situation.”
The story has a lot of potential and I absolutely love it. HOWEVER, as the story progresses, the author made a lot of mistakes along the way: plot holes, a strange naming sense, poor world-building (lacks originality), arcs that drag on because the MC needs to collect his Pokémon (females), and obviously dubious and unsettling romance.
There are many things I strongly disagree with, especially the Harem— (In fact, it would give more personality to the character if he only ended up with one person, but that's just me and my strong desire to ship Camus with Vikir.) However, most of you will probably agree that the author should have stick with just two female leads, because when Dolores and Sinclaire were introduced, the first two, Camus and Aiyen, got less screen time. This is disappointing since we had already built a strong attachment to them but the author basically forgot about them.
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There are many things I strongly disagree with, especially the Harem— (In fact, it would give more personality to the character if he only ended up with one person, but that's just me and my strong desire to ship Camus with Vikir.) However, most of you will probably agree that the author should have stick with just two female leads, because when Dolores and Sinclaire were introduced, the first two, Camus and Aiyen, got less screen time. This is disappointing since we had already built a strong attachment to them but the author basically forgot about them.
who can tell me where can i finish itt
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