BEST TRIAL READ SO FAR IN THE PAST MONTH, while the title can be very misleading and makes it seem like a typical Top-up system kind of novel, the whole premise is actually quite amazing. This whole book can be seen as a compilation of many different stories, of people who have been selfless and have done much to help others in their lives, and mc is the character who sends them off in a way that is deserving for what they have done. We rarely see the mc but that is of little matter, because the author has a way with making readers truly feel the sadness from the different scenarios. If you by any chance found the first scenario lackluster, please do persevere because iits s the second scenario where things get really good
A hidden gem of a novel with a lot of potential. The thing which made me give low rating is the really slow pacing of the novel. 60 chapters in and it's still nothing interesting. The MC used his powers like a maximum of 5 times. There are no concrete FL's except for the senior disciple and his sister? The writing quality and the updates are good, the pacing of the story is bad. You can skip a lot of chapter like the tournament arc and all which make no sense for being there except for some character introductions. I'm not gonna read 10-20 chapters for 2 characters to get introduced...
I have read up to chapter 25 so I can't say for the whole novel if it went better. The novel is completed with only 450 chapters. The novel just isn't that interesting enough for me to waste my time to read that much chapters. This is the main problem with this novel. It is tiresome to read which leads to to the audience tired to invest time in reading this novel. There is also the common problem with the dialogues. The medium of the novel is the writing. We can't see how they talk but can only imagine it with how the author writes. Having overreaction and unrealistic dialogues makes the characters in the novel dumber and makes you imagine that they have screw loose. It tried to be comedic but just failed. This won't gather enough readers to make it viable to translate especially with how much chapters it only have.
A novel that did the premise of picking up "attributes" and things from other people just right. This too also had good potential for nationalism, but again webnovel decided that mutant succubus was better???
Good storyline and character background. The character motivations are very relatable and this story feels real. The author is in the right direction. Good job.
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