Bro this Mac is a fucking idiot he keeps plotting remove plots on people who killed him in the simulations and that causes like half his problems. Also he keeps acting super arrogant to the point where he acts like the biggest once l ever holy shit man
Finally someone can describe it. I was also quite confused by the strange change in POV. Moreover, it is difficult to get a depiction of the world with these writings
Okay, so this is not a good novel. There's so much plot holes all over the place that if you're really up to reading it for the sake of the guilty pleasure of repetitive xianxia plot, then you're gonna have to turn off your brain.
Firstly, the power system is so confusing. Xianxias tend to hide the higher heavens behind a heaven above the sky and the sky atop the mountains for the sake of an ever expanding world building. This novel does that too but in a world where mountains and heavens are all twisted and turned over each other. Sometimes stronger, sometimes weaker. It's a real mess honestly.
Secondly, the MC has a peanut of a brain. He's done things that made things worse because he chose to solve a problem with even more problems. The romance in this novel is so badly developed and rushed that most of the characters I've encountered felt like cardboard. The syntax and grammar is also either basic or straight up trash.
i can't read more it's irritating it's giving me headache author please add quotation marks and grammar and spelling mistakes ughhh this book need be edited
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Firstly, the power system is so confusing. Xianxias tend to hide the higher heavens behind a heaven above the sky and the sky atop the mountains for the sake of an ever expanding world building. This novel does that too but in a world where mountains and heavens are all twisted and turned over each other. Sometimes stronger, sometimes weaker. It's a real mess honestly.
Secondly, the MC has a peanut of a brain. He's done things that made things worse because he chose to solve a problem with even more problems. The romance in this novel is so badly developed and rushed that most of the characters I've encountered felt like cardboard. The syntax and grammar is also either basic or straight up trash.
Overall Rating: 2.3/5.0