Plot of the stories great.Specially the part when is describ inner thought of the goddess. I have to say it was a unique part.'man it was creepy~I still have a goosebumps'
won't lie the power system in this novel is trash at times you have some of the skills at extreme and then perfection and couple chapters later you say the mc is not at that point yet and the cultivation levels need work I'm confused with it the story it self has potential but it has a lot holding it back.
This is a pretty good read tbh, i hope it gets picked. It’s definitely better than other mediocre books that somehow gets picked. I would love to read beyond 60 chs
No me gusta cuando el autor pone su personaje contra el personaje principal de la historia, porque no directamente hacerlo con el MC de esa historia y así puedes cambiar muchas cosas? Me caga que el MC se asuste por el otro mc
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Honestly. finishing 21 chapters in one shot is challenging, but "YES" I did it. Sci-Fi to it's best. As a writer who aimed to make my book Sci-Fi as well, this is a good read.At first, the Matrioshka Brain really make my brain fried a little as I am getting too used to Chinese-style Pin-yin Novels. Suddenly introduced to a new name made me stunned for a moment there.The story is written carefully with good consideration on the plot itself. I won't get deep into the story, but in my opinion, this is a good read. There was a hint of eastern fantasy and western fantasy mixed together, which makes this book seems better in overall quality.Good luck in the Webnovel Spirity Award contest. Let's keep writing and I'll keep this book in my collection for my reference and motivation too.And shameless self-advertising. This is Yanglin, writer of Legendary Orc Craftsman, Supreme Emperor of Mist, and Dimensional Store System in Apocalypse. If you're reading my review about Sabin's amazing Story, might as well give my work a try too. Thank you, everyone!
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