The Alpha and the Mistake

~CH. 65The score should actually be a bit higher but the variables are equally distributed, I should give it 4.5.It is a great story, but I didnt see any Kingdom building except a bit from the prince. If you look for a slow pacing adventure (as much as I can tell now), it is good.The MC is... what can I say, dont really reflect his experiences as someone who lived for 364 reincarnations. The stutter and undeciveness inbetween is really more or less showing someone who had one life time and that is it, and as such I see him.The side characters are fine. World building too etc. What is really really annoying is the really slow pacing, I mean reaaaaaally slow. If you like reading 5 or so chapters about how they fight for one night, be my guest but I can not or how they sit and talk...And I already jumped multiple chapters because it is soooo slow. I can see for what it is and as such, I greatly appreciate it but nothing for me and there is almost no Kingdom building.

very good begginer novel, ang ganda nang flow ng stories tas nagustuhan ko yung concept na iba iba ang stories kada chapter pero may times na nakakabitin hehe but overall love it.

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If you don't want to read ”Vote for my book please.” thousands of times then I would not recommend this book to you but if you want to read it then go ahead you will enjoy.

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Jeff: NO!

By now all the zombies from the city knew where I was, but I shrug it off; is not like they could do anything about it. Even more, only the Runners could keep up with my "slow" pace, as the Hunters didn't want to enter our little game anymore.

"Why?" you asked "I'm the one who said it first" you paused and touch my face "I can never turn back time but I'm here now, I'm here now, Rana".

strengthened in the night

this novel is great, especially for those who love CEO, business managers and from poor to rich novel. I recommend you check this out

First, world-building is beautiful. The opening history was enticing and makes you want to read more. Th fact that different races are involved makes it a high-class fantasy. Can't wait to see their interaction. If u are a lover of anime and fantasy, this book is for you.

way the characters are designed it's magnificent. I am always looking forward for every single update because once I read I feel like I have to read more, I think I need to sue the author for this!!! Because you're starting to make me an addict🤬, jokes aside I really have nothing to say about this I just hope that the author will have more inspiration so he/she would not stop to write hehehe, but still don't forget to rest. Thank you author!!!