The storyline and characters of this novel are really good, I am looking forward for the character development of MC and heroines and the future plots and challenges. I recommend you all to read this novel.
Some advice for the Author. Please note that this is meant as constructive criticism, not complaining, as I love the story.You really need to get an English Thesaurus to broaden your vocabulary and help find more appropriate descriptive words. I know others have spoken to you about "lowly" being used improperly already (should word swap every instance of "lowly" with "softly"), but some other words are really out of place as well. For example; "nodding furiously in agreement". Furiously is a word normally used to describe a degree of anger. It "can" be used to describe intensity, but "nodding furiously" will throw off your readers because it implies anger (check the definition of the root word "fury" to better understand why). There are several other words that would better describe the visual you were intending, such as "vigorously
Main character is overpower but also is very smart and likeable . I'm glad this main character are not like others overpower mc , ( who's don't think the consequences of offending another powerhouse and also very arrogant . Yeah you're the main character but that doesn't mean you can do anything and latter regret it ) . This main character is very smart ,for hiding his face , name and power ( some author even forget to hide their mc face when facing enemy ) . The power development is very detailed and op ( but consider the god , seven virtue and others entity ) . The side story maybe too long . Overall for me , its very nice orginal novel , that suit my taste of overpower mc .Note : English is my second language so i'm sorry for the pronouns or misspelling
Character development, ok. World building ok-ish. Grammar, ok. Druid class, more than ok and not the usual swordsman/mage/assassin. Mad Snail = questionable.
Whilst this may be a little biased it is a piece of work that I thoroughly enjoy making and I hope everyone else who reads this will find as much fun and entertainment as I do creating this masterpiece and find it hard to express it through words (last bit too over the top?...) XD
A simplistic read.A good one to enjoy passing ur time hand some common elements from different books.πππππππππππππππ€·π€·π€·π€·π€·π€·ππππππππππ
Medusa felt undermined and endeavored to Attack the unseeable adversary, however was unsuccessful. The goddess was unconscious that this element had existed before time and past dimensionless space, the plane of presence of which Medusa involved was just a youngster's toy in his eyes. Kytheralyinmatys became sick of her altering and broke the Infinity Jewel which she held in her embodiment apparently wrecking presence alongside her soul. He started to reshape and change various universes and reestablished the lives of the fallen divine beings and goddesses since it was he who gave them adore at first. Everything was by and by as it appeared or so individuals had idea.
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