Confusing grammar. Very long-winded. Who needs 6000 words per chapter that are merely establishing the generic cultivation setting? Just make a 600 word prologue, then gut these chapters down to 1500 words. Lan Feng is creepy. The author is clearly female, because only a female would specifically make a Kpop star main character.5. "and his figure was depressingly short." I hope this isn't yaoi garbage. I have to hold out hope that he's merely a pretty boy.8. "“Don’t worry, the leftovers from the buffet always goes to the martial art schools that dad manages," what cultivation world is this? Normally there would be so much tension built up in wuxia. His family, or him, or his friends would have been assaulted a few times. Everyone would be calling him trash, and people would assume he is broken and defective. Instead, he's beautiful and everyone loves him. He has two goals so far (finding his old dead granny Lin Feng, and helping the pheonix have revenge) but they are so distant. He doesn't have any immediate goals.9. One of their male friends wants to rape the male MC. Xing had to threaten him with castration so he wouldn't. This is some creepy yaoi garbage after all. I skipped ahead to 16 and this is also profoundly boring. Somehow the gay rapist could detect his saint beast.
I really love this story, I already read the story of their parents and 2 siblings. everyday I've waited for the updates. your emotion while reading the story is like a roller coaster, you can cry and laugh, you fell in love with the characters and you wish that there's more story of each character
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