✌️✌️✌️....Needs more polishing but it has plenty of actions on the first chapters...the history of the MC is blurred...the synopsis got me....i thought it was a translation
First, this book still needs to be edited. The author keeps promising one, but I am past chapter 200 and it is still atrocious. Every paragraph has at least one typo. That’s not including the occasional weird, and nonsensical sentence structures, or the poorly identified conversations. It makes the book hard to read.The author does a good job with the story telling and world building. But, I am starting to see the errors in consistence that start to plaque many web novels. I am to the point I am not sure I will continue to invest my time in the story.
Okay I have read just the few chapters and let me say it is not dissapointing and it is actually Great. Contrary to what you would expect, it isnt one of those less detailed and very slow paced type of novels. Although it is slow paced its not "THAT" slow and you can actually feel the story progress as long as you give it time, it also contains more detail compared to the regular stories that have a fast pace which helps the story progress smoothly. So this is just my first part of review and I will change it later. See you guys again
A fairly unique concept of short but quite entertaining stories is not a reading for everyone but for those who like to discover small things this is their reading
"What is the titled princess doing all the way here?" A rather hoarse voice could be heart by a young prince walking up to Liu Lian and her husband who glared at him.
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