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This is great disappointment for me ...the concept was unique on clishe setting but I hoped it was interesting but there so many dumb action by mc and plot holes and the rich guys who appear too dumb gave my brain migran and seriously lowered my iq ... translation deppects were one of main attraction..as many name were wrong and even chapter 36 and 37 are same
For those who expect something new, I can only say don't even waste your time trying this story. It's a usual reincarnation story where old monster who didn't give a singe fuc.k about lives and wished to reach peak of cultivation reincarnated and become, well as you can easily guess became a family loving child. As in almost all those type of stories Mc who was loner and wished to achieve peak of cultivation by any means, reincarnated into body of a boy who has a family and yeah as usual he got attacked to them instantly and can't think of leaving them alone and staring his own journey. And also Mc don't act as old monster who lived hundreds of years, he acts like 15 years old boy and nothing more. So if you're looking for story with protagonist who acts like he should, then you're in a wrong place. Hope this was helpful for some people who don't want to get disappointed. Don't have anything about stories with puss.y Mc because alot of people like them, but for me those kind of Mc's are cancer.
The beginning is pretty great first 100 chaps or so, afterwards it gets a peanut gallery. Everyone and their aunt repeating stuff for 80% of a chapter. The characters and world are really well built if you can tune out the background characters voices though.
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This story is such a breath of fresh air in this godforsaken app. The author has done a great job so far in balancing, keeping a quality narrative going while applying some smut scenes here and there to spice things up a a bit. I recommend this to anyone who likes a mature eastern fantasy.
I read the story until about chapter 23. The story was okay even with the grammar issues. However around chapter 18 the plot started to deteriorate and I ended up skimming the next 5 chapters. Due to the plot deteriorating even more over those chapters I could not bring myself to continue reading this story.
The story is okay, but the Mc is way too stupid for his own good, I like how he helps his subjects, but every time he helps them he always leaves it unfinished leading to more problems to arise for them. His choices of taking in subjects that were his enemy is also stupid, but due to the story they converted to his followers because he is strong. The Mc could be way better than what he is right now, we also barely know anything about the world, also the characters are barely fleshed out, all we know is oh she got curves and sheβs beautiful, thatβs it. Overall my rating isTranslation quality: 5 starsStability of updates: 5 starsStory development: 3 starsCharacter design: 2 starsWorld background: 2 stars3.4 stars
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