Soul theory

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        Zhu Ling Yu pondered what he should do with this information. After all, it had nothing to do with him. Even if he decided to get involved what could he do? He was all powerful compared to these chumps. Noticing that the last details had fallen into place, Zhu Ling Yu got a glint in his eyes. Bloodline limits! So many bloodlocked inheritances! They weren't even kept hidden! They could be taken! There were so many possibilities! If he could get something good enough, he could bring it back for his grannies as a bribe to not be angry, and not marry him off again! It was perfect! Though he would have to create new body to try it out, and he'd have to be on this world for a mortal lifetime, but that was a small price to pay. After all, he remembered what had happened the last time something like this had happened. There was a jealous guy whose fiance was one of his fangirls, and he had ended up 'tripping' through a dimensional gate that 'just happened to be there' and the fact that the guy was studying the Dao of space had nothing to do with anything. Man his grannies were upset. Actually, he wondered how that world was doing. While it was pretty useless, there were all sorts of entertainment. Cool things like ´Movies´ and ´the internet´. Anyways, back to creating a body. According to that missing-nin´s memories, there was a clan in his old village called the ´Uchiha´ who had an bloodline called the ´Sharingan´ which could copy jutsus. If he could evolve it to work on magic, or qi, he´d be golden. Now how was he going to do this?

Stand Inspection: End.

Later in the mess hall, everybody was celebrating cheering and talking joyfully, after all, good food and alcohol is what makes happy people

I waited for the captain to open the door and walk in as I followed him in.

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

Y no update

Shameless review time. So, my book's awesome. And I'll tell you why. My writing quality is pretty good, errors are pretty hard to come by and my vocab is fairly varied. And overall, my sentences flow naturally and words are used in ways that suit their connotations. My use of punctuation is good but I don't tend to use colons or semi colons, not that I think anyone actually cares though lolStory development isn't something I'll talk too in depth about, but, my pacing is on the slightly faster end sometimes but that's about it.Character design, so I think the way I've made character's different to what most would do, but I don't wanna spoil so shoo and read the novel. But, in terms of characterisation, it's pretty good except I'm not sure if I want to tie philosophical themes into characters yet since that takes brain power and knowledge (was planning on making a hedonistic or egoistic character but I need to think a lil bit for that)Update stability, so, I post daily atm but I can and will take rests when I need them, so I don't burn out.World background. So, I think I'm really good at this, a lot of authors just vomit info all over you. But, I prefer to only bring up info when it's relevant, since it's easier to remember and digest that way and leaves a little bit of thinking for you to do.

Parece bem interessante mesmo! Uma mãe lutando para salvar o filho no apocalipse

Lol It's cool, the characters and the world need to be better addressed, but the story isn't bad. I think that when there are more chapters it will improve these points more.